Here’s the link to my game story in today’s Trentonian. The entered/entering faux pas in the fourth paragraph is my fault, the “Lowell T-Devils” thing was an editing snafu and not any wishful thinking/foreshadowing on my part.
If you thought it was good, send them an e-mail and let them you know you liked it. Might help me get some extra work.
And if you thought it sucked, tell them that too.
Mike Ashmore, mashmore98 AT gmail.com
October 31, 2009 at 10:39 am
Great story!!! Probably would not have noticed the 4th paragraph if you hadn’t pointed it out.
Keep up the good work.